So, as we all know, Alyx recently wrote Wheels of Justice, a thoroughly fictional tale in which ‘Calyx’ deals with her prison bitch ‘Loki’. Loki gets a pretty raw deal in that tale I felt, so I wrote this little ‘fan fiction’ to compliment Alyx’s original work. Once again, these are not my characters, I’ve just made off with them. Just to utterly blow everyone’s minds, I did actually ask Alyx about this first. I know. Crazy. It’s like I’m getting soft in my old age.
Early morning came to the Bucket earlier than other places. Perhaps it was the clanging of guards carelessly slapping batons against metal grilles, perhaps it was the atmosphere of low level anxiety that pervaded the entire place, whatever it was, Loki found herself waking up before the birds most mornings.
Wriggling around, unable to get comfortable, she decided to see if Callie was awake. Peeking across the room, Loki let out an experimental whimper.
Her eyes closed, her hands behind her head as she dozed, Callie heard the sound and smiled a satisfied smile.
Loki’s eyes narrowed. There it was, proof that Callie enjoyed the pain she’d inflicted. She liked that Loki was still hurting from the spanking. She was a big, mean, bully with no compassion at all.
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Wow. That was pretty amazing. I love the little details you put in there…about the prison, about Loki’s life after “the incident.” Your brats always have a bit of pathos about them — my heart really goes out to her. At the same time, I can really feel Callie’s frustration. And my itching palm goes out to her!
The scene in the laundry cracked me up. I was (like Callie) braced for the worst, and reading about an atomic wedgie was a big laugh and relief in one.
I’d really love to see where this goes next. Although I know you have a lot to do with your other work too. (Hmm…if you aren’t able to finish it may have to be tag team.
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Alyx Reply:
July 23rd, 2010 at 8:55 am
And btw, “Wools of Gearstick”??? *snort* Remember what I said about your titles? I take it back!
Loki Reply:
July 23rd, 2010 at 9:04 am
My titles remain epic.
This one especially.
Let’s see what the readers think as to another chapter eh, eh, eh? (Cue Beyonce or whoever it is makes that noise. Oh Timbaland. No, Rihanna. Yes. Rihanna.)
Thanks for the kind words and the non objections to the swiping of your characters.
Yay!! I love this. And the tag team idea is awesome. I thought of doing something like that to get ‘The Holiday’ finished but had no-one to tag!
Thanks for another great story you two – I am a happy bunny reader tonight !
Loki Reply:
July 24th, 2010 at 4:01 am
The secret to finding someone to tag is to rope hapless bystanders into your story and make them yearn for revenge
Alyx Reply:
July 24th, 2010 at 6:50 pm
HAL, maybe you should re-think that idea. Anything to get “The Holiday” finished! I’ll bet your readers would agree…and maybe some of them would want to participate too???
Hmmm, Loki might want to stop ‘poking the bear’. Although, if you don’t push the boundaries, how do you know where they are?
Patience. Callie has much.
More please.
Who’s writing the next chapter? Who do we need to ‘motivate’ >:)
Loki Reply:
July 24th, 2010 at 4:00 am
I’m not poking the bear. The bear freakin’ loves it. Just look at that grin on the bear’s face and the funny purry noises it makes!
Alyx Reply:
July 24th, 2010 at 6:53 pm
Who’s writing the next chapter? Who do we need to ‘motivate’
Hmm….I’ll take a “swing” at it. In fact, I’d love to take a swing in so many areas on this lovely site. *g* But I’ll start with the story, if Ms. Renard has no objection?
Mackenzie Reply:
July 25th, 2010 at 3:46 am
hehehe I have a motivational sketch.
It seemed to help Loki
*s* Nice that the two of you are able to do a tag-team thing. It seems to be working, and that can only come from mutal respect and trust.
Forget arm wrestling, watching the two of you duke it out with “story wrestling” rocks. This is so much fun it should be illegal. I don’t remember who commented that y’all should be charging admission, but they were totally right.
Mackenzie Reply:
July 25th, 2010 at 4:08 am
I’d pay. *big grin, nods eagerly*