I’ve no idea if anyone is even really all that interested in yet more of this today, but here it is 
Rigel shifted uncomfortably on her bar stool, took a swig of her beer and sighed deeply. Around her, women were laughing, chatting, courting. In the middle of it all she was alone, more alone than she’d felt in a long time. Her backside was sore, her pride was wounded and her heart ached, remembering the look on Sadie’s face outside the gym. She’d fucked everything up so, so badly.
“Cheer up, it ain’t that bad.”
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It truly sucks when you write a reply only to hit the wrong key and delete the whole thing. ;(
“I’ve no idea if anyone is even really all that interested in yet more of this today, but here it is” Now you’re sounding like Rigel not sure if Sadie loves her. I am always interested and waiting for another story/installment/ebook from you. The timing is great meds, fluids and a story. Can we do this again..they have healing effects that can’t be matched by some quack. Why do I need to go see some quack that is going to poke and prod and prescribe some pills I can’t get down this swollen throat–when Dr.Loki has the best medicine for a sick Chicklet. (*Not trying to offend anyone with the quack reference–I just don’t like doctors and the such and I try to avoid them at all costs.)
It’s good to see that Rigel has someone that is watching out for her (and Sadie). First things first, Rigel needs to listen for the *pop*—then Rigel has some soul searching, closet cleaning and foundation building to do. I know she’ll be up to the task. The hardest part after messing up is picking yourself up and facing those you wronged, and those that have wronged you. I have a feeling with a friend like Tank supporting her and deciding to be honest with herself, Rigel will be able to be open and honest with everyone else. In keeping with the spirit of honesty it is frustrating when your characters are jerks, big meanies and the such, but in reality it’s what sets your works apart from the rest. They are human, believable, fallible. If we wanted fairy tales we would visit D-Land.
*Will explain the *pop* if need be, but think everyone knows what I mean.
Thank you for another splendid installment. I’m ready for the next one.
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Thanks Chicklet. There were quite a few installments today, so I’m not sure when the next one will be ready, one never knows
I hope you feel better soon, you better see the doctor too! My stories unfortunately fall short in the healing department.
I’m sure it is annoying when the tops are less than perfect, but one must make some adjustments if one is not to write the same story over and over again
I for one, have no idea what the pop thing is in reference to.
Get better soon
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1chicklet Reply:
July 19th, 2010 at 1:55 pm
I am so very grateful that there were so many installments in one day. It was such a special treat. Yes, you are correct, one never knows with you. However, that’s what makes it more special (and sometimes difficult), but I choose to focus on the positive. (wasn’t trying to seem ungrateful–just letting you know that I’m ready to read and enjoy when you’re ready to share.) **
Fever broke about an hour ago, and I would just love to use that as the reason in saying, “No sense in seeing the doctor now, I can deal with this on my own.” :s However, I don’t believe that to be a wise decision for several reasons: the upper and lower resp. infections I’m sure I have, the fact that it broke the other day so I went to work, and it came back with vengence, oh and let me not forget I’ve been advised by some wonderful people I need to see the doctor.
(Just cuz it’s wise doesn’t mean I’m not going to be dragging my feet and pouting– I have another 6 hours before the dreaded appt.)
Yes, and you do have a way with your adjustments and writing. You seem to have an endless supply of material and quality product.
*pop* or in Rigel’s case *POP* = The sound Rigel is going to make when your head comes out of her a$$.
Plan on reading the latest installments again without the fever curtain.
I’m sure they’ll only get better.
**Never thought I would find the treatment for impatience on a website** Oh, how little did I know.
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redbottomedgirl Reply:
July 19th, 2010 at 4:33 pm
*snort* I knew what the *pop* was..maybe it’s an American thing? Or maybe I’ve just been told to get my head out of my rectum enough times that I’m familiar with that particular euphemism. *grin* I totally love Chicklet’s use of the *pop* here.
Rigel should bitch slap Tank for taking her beer. Obviously, the more alcohol she consumes, the better she’ll feel and the better her judgment will be. Duh! I would seriously be pissed off if I were her. But then again, I’m generally a fan of drinking to cope.
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Wow, you’ve been posting like a fiend. Thanks for putting this last one up, as it’s a great “resolution” type of chapter, at least for the moment. We all need friends like Tank.
I agree, you never forget your first. And you also never forget the first one who touches you in that certain way (not always the same person, obviously)….sometimes it takes forever to let go. (Glad you asked about that “pop” thing…I was assuming something completely different. *bg*)
(Btw, glad you’re going to see the doc, Chicklet. Hope you feel better soon.)
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Loki Reply:
July 19th, 2010 at 11:53 pm
I have been fiendishly busy with the spanking writing lately. Why? Because I loves it
Yeah, the pop thing was beyond me, but now I have seen the light.
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1chicklet Reply:
July 20th, 2010 at 12:00 am
Does that mean you heard the *pop*? Hehe
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Loki Reply:
July 20th, 2010 at 12:11 am
Hey!
(Probably not.)
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1chicklet Reply:
July 20th, 2010 at 12:16 am
I have on more than one occasion….
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Loki never doubt that there is interest out here for your stories! What a treat to get all of this in the last day.
Thank you
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Loki Reply:
July 19th, 2010 at 11:52 pm
Thanks HAL
I wouldn’t want to bury everyone under piles of spanking fiction 
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Alyx Reply:
July 20th, 2010 at 5:41 am
I wouldn’t want to bury everyone under piles of spanking fiction
Oh, I can think of worse ways to go.
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Another fab chapter! You should really make a career out of this! Do you at least write a piece for your local paper? I sure many a day would be improved by beginning it with some of your humour
It seems Rigel has a few painful secrets in her past. Poor Rigel
She deserves it.
Not that that excuses her behaviour towards Sadie, and Kate too, but mostly Sadie.
I like that Tank gave her a good push, er…swat, in the right direction. She has a lot of apologizing to do but I think things will turn out alllllllll right
And Sadie should get another free swat
I meant she should get to swat to Rigel … not the other way way around :/
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Loki Reply:
July 19th, 2010 at 11:51 pm
Thanks Mackenzie
Actually it is already my career, I’ve been working as a writer since college, though I don’t do much print work these days.
Rigel is indeed riddled with problems and flaws, but then again, who isn’t
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Mackenzie Reply:
July 20th, 2010 at 1:56 am
Niiice
Do the sheep help to inspire you?
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